Chapter 1
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Honestly I feel like we should’ve skipped the prologue entirely and instead have the truth come out through-out the story. That would give it more time to be workshopped because…
It’s not really good; it makes Tails look like a complete failure, and it makes Knuckles look stupid. The prologue, I’d honestly write out of canonicity as soon as possible because it’s a very bad start to the story.
Chapter 1 however is really great. The world Sonic wakes up in is perfect for someone like him, despite a lack of adventure, but it’s a perfect place for him to recover.
Bring up the prologue, it’s also the low point of the art. There were multiple times where I had no idea what actually happened. I knew the outcome, but I didn’t understand the action to get to that point. Like how Sonic lost his arm and leg.
However, Chapter 1 recovers from this.
Frankly, again, the prologue holds the whole story back and should just be removed just because it’s a hinderance, just like Tails was during the prologue.
I’m looking forward to the next issue! I’d give this a good 6/10 so far. The prologue really hit it down.
Not good
Naw when shadow and sonic first spoke to each other there are any and knuckles looking aliens.
I want more this is so good bro
bro is all about his tea.
damn he really wants him ded
I feel bad for sonic 😞😭😔🥺
i’m surprised that worked
BRUH who is the guy at the end
damn
Hey guys you can read the ongoing comic over here; https://brokenfutureau.the-comic.org/ just a fellow reader wanting to help out 🙂
I like the story and the art style just i dont know what to think about the manga style thats going to be in the next comic 🤔
so sad
awww
SHADOW IS SO FREAKING CUTE BRO
slight sonadow vibes from this comic
OMG ITS SO CUTE
Your first page is in a different spot, I thought I should let you know.😁
MOREEEEEE
Page 11 should be page 1
also LETS GOOOO
I cant wait for the next part!!! OvO
WHERE. IS. PART. 3?????? NEED IT. I HUNGER FOR MORE. MUST. READ. MORE…
thats crazy
This is epic
NEEEEEEEEEEEDDD MOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Dude this comic is awesome! MAKE MORE I WANT TO READ RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Omg best comic I’ve ever read!
FINALLY!! I CAN DO A COMIC DUB!!
Best fan comic ever. And SHADOW IS ALIVE!!!!